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Jul 21, 2007
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Savagely Concord
Ancient Romans engaged
dark-blue grapes
in a ghastly fight,
its violence rightly
to be deplored.
Although in hindsight
it does appear
the grapes defended
themselves
with all their might
in valiant ways
over many, many days,
in the end they were,
by those Romans,
savagely Concord.
— barbsdad2003, Jul 21, 2007
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