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the cruisers

 

at the ship’s buffet
on a sun, sunny day,

the tourists took
a long, long time

to plate up their food
and stow it away—

whate’er it was they
could assimilate.

but olive them ate;
then those cruisers joined

a long, long line
to evacuate …

aft which they joined anew
the very same queue

at the ship’s buffet
on that very same

sun, sunny day.

— barbsdad2003, Jul 28, 2007

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