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Nov 20, 2010
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Singular
I
Singular, alone.
A transient being ,
wandering the earth.
Connecting with some
disconnecting with others.
Assimilation of recollections.
Fated as a race to enter and exit, solo.
meanwhile waiting for the other half
of the equation..
The purpose of life is to
Forge the eternal connection.
Spiralling out only to return,
shelter from the cold.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lou
14 years 7 months ago
Shirl
Thanks Shirl,
love lou
lou
14 years 7 months ago
Hey JC
Thank you that's high praise.
lou xx
Kailashana2
14 years 7 months ago
Lou!
Lou!
I can only follow Seren's cue.
A Bow.
~
lou
14 years 7 months ago
Well
Thanks , that is very kind of you .
lou
Psyve
14 years 7 months ago
Lou
Very beautifully expressed:
"The purpose of life is to Forge the eternal connection."
A sentiment I agree with.
Psyve
Psyve
14 years 7 months ago
Lou
Very beautifully expressed:
"The purpose of life is to Forge the eternal connection."
A sentiment I agree with.
Psyve
lou
14 years 7 months ago
Psyve
Thank you . im still looking .
lou
lou
14 years 7 months ago
Xena
Thank you
Candlewitch
14 years 7 months ago
Dear lou
I can totally relate to this poem. I love the style in which it is written. Your words just reach in a grab me.
love, cat
lou
14 years 7 months ago
Cat
Thanks I'm glad you liked it
Lou xx
magics02
14 years 7 months ago
Great job Lou
I see in this one a great thinking verse and see your poetry is coming along great here. Miss chatting with you but I have been working alot on alot of projects so time is varied and I am happy to stop in here and read this tonite. great job Lou and hope your feeling fine:)
Love Mona
xoxoxo