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Adam's love and lust

Adam's love and lust

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He may be too far from us but

reaction of his action continues to keep in sin

He had eaten that forbidden fruit  but

we are suffering for his denial of his God's command

Our purity and soul has got smudges of sin so

we lost everything in our lives except lust and sex

If I meet  Adam, I will ask

why did you do this my man?

Do you feel that we have been driven foraway from Him

if you feel

The cause is the action of Adam's love and lust on Eve

SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN

 

— SAKTHEEE2007, Nov 11, 2007

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