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Nov 11, 2007
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Adam's love and lust
Adam's love and lust
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He may be too far from us but
reaction of his action continues to keep in sin
He had eaten that forbidden fruit but
we are suffering for his denial of his God's command
Our purity and soul has got smudges of sin so
we lost everything in our lives except lust and sex
If I meet Adam, I will ask
why did you do this my man?
Do you feel that we have been driven foraway from Him
if you feel
The cause is the action of Adam's love and lust on Eve
SAKTHI RAVICHANDRAN
— SAKTHEEE2007, Nov 11, 2007
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