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Nov 21, 2010
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Uncoil, with gradual breaths
Open your eyes ,refocus,
twenty twenty vision..
Free
span the breadth
and width , expand.
Laugh, cry, scream
Let it all out.
Expose yourself to reality.
Free.
span the breadth
and width,
expand.
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Bonitaj
14 years 7 months ago
Loved
this exhortation to BE YOURSELF! Freed up to enjoy it!!
Nice one Lou!
Boni
lou
14 years 7 months ago
Boni
Thanks
Lou
judyanne
14 years 7 months ago
everybody need to take this advise....
good write lou
did you notice your line breaks with the repeated stanza?
'span the breadth
and width , expand. '
'span the breadth
and width,
expand.'
did you mean to make them different? just me - i think it looks tidier if they're the same
love and hugs
judy
xxxx