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father's day
violet pansies with silly faces
ask me about truth
it's Sunday morning and old hurts
return to kick me in the guts and i'm
already down for the count
when your father is dead there's nothing
but silence between you and his grave
absence is sixty-four scorpion stings,
but you keep
on walking
my children will always remind you that
Father's Day is not about men with selfish
inclinations, it's about a mother's child,
loving you with their always-children hearts--
love that chains melodies of forgiveness
to little heels that will never crush you.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Dedicated to Louis, Judd, Carlos, Spencer, Aaron and Barry. ~A
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
pleiades
14 years 1 month ago
i have not been so moved by a
i have not been moved by a poem
as much as i was by this this one, in a
long, long time
such powerful emotion...so masterfully harnessed
i can not single out any one line, emotion or intent
for particular praise, as it is such a complete work
in admiration,
p
Kailashana2
14 years 1 month ago
Nice 2c you again, Ms
Nice 2c you again, Ms Pleiades.
I sent the poem to my kids and I'm sure they'll share it with their fathers.
much love and gratitude for your kindness,
~A
Kailashana2
14 years 1 month ago
In our lives, the truth of
In our lives, the truth of our experiences are never *buried*.
Wounded children grow up to be wounded adults who raise wounded children who wound their children. Until the cycle is broken.
~A
CCfire
14 years 1 month ago
There is nothing I can say
There is nothing I can say here, this left me with an ache on my heart, I lost my father when I was 10 yrs old...this event and now your words leave me unable to put into words what I feel but know that I DId feel this. xx