Candlewitch

Jun 20, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Bard

"Bard"

Devotion of self-sacrifice,
And the humble artist's
Fervent beauty,
Tumble upon the canvas.
Like the Shaman's Spirit Wheel
Of eternal fire and ice,
Speaks of the forming of the world,
The creator's ardent hands
Shape wet clay
On the potter's wheel,
This natural simplicity
Shapes this poet's pen.

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Northwestern Wisconsin USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, William Blake, Bob Dylan, Tom Petty, Carlos Castaneda, Jim Morrison, the whole of Neopoet and many more.

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Comments

lou

14 years 1 month ago

Cat

First of all i've got to say you never fail to amaze me, then let me say where has the darkness gone?

great stuff

Lou

Candlewitch

14 years 1 month ago

Thanks, Lou,

The darkness is in my closet, LOL! I'll tote some out next posting.

always, Cat

Eduardo Cruz

14 years 1 month ago

wow!!

Now that's how to explain creation of a poem, beautiful. you are definily "Miss Thing" you go girl with your bad self!

Eddie

loved

14 years 1 month ago

The poets have well praised the bard in thee

but the pen must flow
from mind's ink
where will it ensue from,
do tell me ,
without an iota
of ceremony

loved

13 years 4 months ago

i perchance selected the same familiar one

UNANSWERED
by accident
Cat ..
maybe..

Candlewitch

13 years 4 months ago

Dear Loved,

Yes, unanswered by accident. Sorry, I didn't see your comment sooner. I think we all strive to be artists and in our striving come desired results. As can be seen by your wonderous writings. Keep on writing, dear Loved poet and fine artist!

always, Cat

loved

13 years 4 months ago

Thank you Cat

You are a great poet of today
I am only trying to cocoon out slowly
in my own inimitable way
hope someday
I may be able to pass your way
but time for that is not ripe yet today
You summon an artist in me
it's a signal praise
I hope to live up to your
high levels as you say levels as you say

Candlewitch

13 years 4 months ago

Thank You Loved!

You are greatly appreciated by me and many others here. *hugs*

always, Cat

loved

13 years 4 months ago

nice to know

thanks with best wishes and regards to all
who love loved
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