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Nov 21, 2010
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darkest night
inside each melody --
fragrant spark
playing round us
incandesces everything
at once
on light beams, songs
for their own pleasure play
desideratum's designedly
desiring desist of
insanity's mare of night
melodies play on
nonetheless, so there will
be light in darkest night.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Victorclaude
14 years 7 months ago
As always, thank you, Shirley
As always, thank you, Shirley.
Love,
Victor
Bonitaj
14 years 7 months ago
VC
I really liked this theme and how you brought it to unexpected fruition in the last stanza!
melodies play on
nonetheless, so there will
be light in darkest night.
Regards
Victorclaude
14 years 7 months ago
Bonitaj,
Bonitaj,
Thank you very much.
Victor