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TOGETHER YOU AND I

HELP ME, SQEEZE ME, LOVE ME, CARE FOR ME,

I AM CONFUSED IN A WAY ,

WITHOUT A WORD TO SAY,

NOTHING SEEMS ALRIGHT,

UNTIL I AM WITH YOU,

ALL DAY AND NIGHT.

 

SCARED BEYOND ALL REASONS

WITHOUT YOU

MY WORLD SEEMS UNREAL

PLEASE JUST LOVE ME AND KISS ME

I RALLY WISH I WAS WITH YOU

ALL DAY AND NIGHT TOO

YOU AND ME

TOGETHER IN OUR LIVES

TOGETHER YOU AND I

— thomassbaby, Dec 19, 2007

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