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Kailashana2

Jun 23, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

inbetween two worlds

"I hear she was sentenced
to life."
said one angel to another

the wind pressed on the meadow green
daisies roared like young waterfalls
willows danced in the sun like naked trees

only a cry was heard
this side of heaven.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Written yesterday. The poem I wrote this morning will be submitted to Eddie's workshop.

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Ohio, USA

Favorite Poets: Bokonon: “Let your life be the poem you write”. , I'm still writing.....

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Comments

14 years ago

Very nice, concise poem. Some

Very nice, concise poem. Some great concepts going on here:)!

Can't wait to see where this ends up once it's been workshopped:)!