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Jun 24, 2011
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rain
i.
you drew clouds
under my feet
to break my fall
only light
this side
of creation
salmon skies
embraced
your tenderness
ii.
I heard
your heart
calling
only love
will show
the way
let us
reconcile
this passion
before
it turns
to rain
and earth
swallows
our tears
goodbye
goodbye
we meet again.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Thanks Raj.
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
raj
14 years ago
ahhhhhhhhhh,,,i loved these
ahhhhhhhhhh,,,i loved these lines
salmon skies
embraced
your tenderness
magics02
14 years ago
Anna
Just wonderful the feeling and vision I got from this piece of work of yours. I meant to ask you before do you have a book out? If not get busy:)
Love Mona