Happy ending... not

Pain a figment of the mind
Love an illusion of a kind

The game we play,
because we hope and dream.
Fairy tales always end,
with happily ever after

Happy endings don't exist
But, bitter agony does
Shall I read the list
of all the misery?

The list never ends.
But, defeat is not admited
because life is given to love
when you believe in happy endings

Last Few Words: Been awhile since I've written anything...

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

14 years ago

A few mispells in the last verse, but very open and raw. I see it expanding, I hope.

14 years ago

Thanks you guys.. I'll work on it and edit it later on tonight.

14 years ago

you have put across your perception of love in a good way...

how about a wee bit of change as in

Happy endings don't exist
But, bitter agony does
Shall I read the list
of all the misery?
(of the painful hurts)

14 years ago

That sounds good.. I'll add it to my editting list. thank you.