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Jul 08, 2011
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Krystal
walking barefoot
the blue glint
shinning of her
sunwashed eyes
the shadow of the crow
slipping brief across
her brow her perfect
cheekbones
summerbrown
alone in her vermillion
sunset thoughts
a single sandwich
wrapped in wax paper
slung from her fist
in a clear Wonderbread
bag
in the dark windbreak
a single cricket sang
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lou
14 years ago
Hi
This poem is so emotive, I can feel the warmth radiating from it.
Lou
magics02
14 years ago
Sighs
Just excellent work Esker. I really envisioned this whole write and I think you did an excellent job once again in portraying your vision and thoughts through words
Great!