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Aug 08, 2011
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Guardian Angel (Mirror/rorriM)
Guardian Angel
when it's all over
only the wanting remains
the struggle goes unspoken
whispering Grandma's name
you feels the stirring echoes
of your Grandma's heart's gentle touch
you couldn't find words to tell her
you misses her so terribly much
now she's your special angel
watching down from above
guiding your uncertain footsteps
tenderly with all her love
knowing her spirit never left you
will bring comfort from the pain
when the struggle goes unspoken
her love will shelter you from the rain...
(* this poem is going into the manuscript Mirror/rorriM)
About This Poem
Review Request Direction:
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lou
13 years 11 months ago
Cat
Awesome as usual, i find it hard to find fault
love lou
Candlewitch
13 years 5 months ago
*Hugs
and thanks, Lou!
always, Cat