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loved
loved
Aug 09, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Hopefully Polite edit......

In hope we live
In amazement we dwell
At which cross roads of life,
We shall meet,
no one can tell,
But we continue to hope
With our desires
limitations we have to cope.
Meet,
perhaps we shall never,
But friends,
We shall be for ever.
Hopefully...
No!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

13 years 11 months ago

Dear Loved,

Very nicely stated! Favorite lines:

In amazement we dwell
At which cross roads of life,
We shall meet,
none can tell,
But we continue to hope

always, Cat

loved

loved

13 years 11 months ago

thanks Cat

for ur continued support,
to which i have always looked forward to
thanks again ,
glad you come by
Please do more often

R

raj

13 years 11 months ago

Loved

nicely crafted piece this is...