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Aug 11, 2011
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Seasoning...
Young, tender moon of spring
pale yellow and smooth as a mirror
The sight of you excites me
Now swollen and full of summer
Your face is lit with the sun
and I swoon in your light
Orange tinged and ruddy of complexion
imparting mysteries across your face
You are the huntress of my soul
A silver orb in icy reverie
reflects on white dunes of snow
Making my heart pound in ecstacy
Many faces and phases of Luna
all with their own special glow
To light my way
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lou
13 years 11 months ago
Gee
I loved this strangely sensual, poem which I felt to be about women.
A very fertile theme. lol
love lou
Geezer
13 years 11 months ago
You are...
one hundred percent correct! Love ya, ~ Gee
BTW, I did get the reference to fertility and Luna.
Candlewitch
13 years 11 months ago
Dear Sir Gee,
I love the metaphors! She must be someone very special. As a moon gazer and worshiper, I really loved all moon references.
A silver orb in icy reverie
reflects on white dunes of snow
Making my heart pound in ecstacy
Many faces and phases of Luna
all with their own special glow
To light my way
always, Cat