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Aug 18, 2011
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What A Way To Go!
to tumble to the end
like a child at play
down a soft grassy glen
on a sunshiny day
hugging the ground
spilling with laughter
ingratiating my bound
to the ditch of hereafter
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Timbo
13 years 11 months ago
loved it ! Well done. Tim
loved it ! Well done.
Tim
brittle light
13 years 11 months ago
thanks, once again, for your
thanks, once again, for your gracious comment