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Aug 31, 2011
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in the needle's eye
The ebbing life of leaves--
my long ago heart
like a dream catcher hanging on
I cannot persuade you,
bear no gifts of consolation
or reconciliation,
just lonely poems, meeting
clay feet on mother earth
rosemary and lavender hint at our passing
the scent of us
leaving nothing behind,
the forest grows wild again
like a vacant stare.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
13 years 10 months ago
Oh yes!
But have I ever mentioned that I have a problem with self-referential poetry, and even worse poems about poems?
Kailashana2
13 years 10 months ago
Why Jess, not that I recall.
Why Jess, not that I recall. Is this where I say Rumpelstiltskincc real fast 3 times?
Smile.
~A
weirdelf
13 years 10 months ago
Not a problem,
just a preference.
I like poetry to be for all.
That is why I have disliked Loved's poetry till recently. It's all been about him/herself and Neopoet.
Lenny of Cohen
13 years 10 months ago
Stoned
and moved by these wonderful words.
L