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in the needle's eye

The ebbing life of leaves--
my long ago heart
like a dream catcher hanging on

I cannot persuade you,
bear no gifts of consolation
or reconciliation,
just lonely poems, meeting
clay feet on mother earth

rosemary and lavender hint at our passing
the scent of us
leaving nothing behind,
the forest grows wild again
like a vacant stare.

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: Ohio, USA

Favorite Poets: Bokonon: “Let your life be the poem you write”. , I'm still writing.....

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weirdelf

weirdelf

13 years 10 months ago

Oh yes!

But have I ever mentioned that I have a problem with self-referential poetry, and even worse poems about poems?

weirdelf

weirdelf

13 years 10 months ago

Not a problem,

just a preference.

I like poetry to be for all.

That is why I have disliked Loved's poetry till recently. It's all been about him/herself and Neopoet.