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mistakes

all around us
every were
mistakes are happening
as i share

we take a look and then we see
all the people who used to be
out friends are out there but thats just okay
cause im going to shore as they are going to sea

im stronger you could say
by not making mistakes
never i will
what ever it takes

no one will stop me
get in my way
no one will chalenge me
cause i know what god to pray

and thats just the truth
this is no lie
i cant make a mistake
so i must bid a bye

i come back in two years
and something is changing
all my no mistake DNA
is rearanging

my goodness i feel
like drowning in the ablyss
because ever since a girl
everysince we first kiss

im making mistakes
im loosing my mind
i cant seem to do it
i cant seem to find

this is horrible
what path should i take
this cant be fine
im far in the lake

im now out to seeeeeeeeeeeee
makin miskats as i go
and that poosion ckiss
will cill mee i no

— Tessadiana, Jan 15, 2009

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