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The Race

Once again, the starting blocks
make me wish I would've stretched;
causing me to be more limber
and, the race not so far-fetched.

It's quiet at the beginning
the sounds of silence rush my ears,
and, I know from other examples
how to disregard my fears.

It's so lonely when you listen
to the blood run through your veins,
causing a dizziness so blinding
only pain, and regret remains.

Afterwards, that burn does seem to fade
bringing the finish-line into sight;
affording sheer determination
to aid my finishing with all my might.

But, should my footsteps falter
or, I'm forced to veer outside;
I will run then, with that much more
fury, to compensate my stride.

Then, the knowledge will rush over me
that I did tackle every "test";
and, through it all I persevered
knowing I truly tried my best.

Too often there are circumstances
sent by fate, to impede our way,
but, we'll be judged on courage
by what we do....not, what we say.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: A metaphor for "life"....I used to run long distance, cross-country. Seemed odd to me, at the time...because, I lived in soo many "hoods", that "race" was never a factor, with me! :) Lol! docmaverick.

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: The High Desert, in the wild west, southern California, U.S. of A.., USA

Favorite Poets: Keates, Poe, Dickinson, and Dr. Seuss. There are a smattering of others, but why bother listing 'em all, ya know?, I also rely on a few of our poets, here....for advice, and what not. I couldn't possibly explain what a fountain of live, effective knowledge we have...right here in our midst ! To catch a glimmer of brilliance, merely visit: the Stream.

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Comments

Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

13 years 10 months ago

This poem.

This poem should be on the door as you leave the dressing room for the track or field, it's such a motivational piece. But also it could be about life. Great write...Regards Roscoe..