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Sep 07, 2011
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You Pulled A fast One
You Pulled A fast One
You sent shivers down many a spine
Including Shirley and mine
We were worried
All this while,
As you hadn't commented
In your own style
Though I am aware
You have to be read three
Is to one
Maybe none
But Stan don’t make us run,
Surgery is no fun,
Life has to be lived well
Ere we all go to the knell,
I won't say heaven or hell,
As in both
Through life's sojourn
Here alone we dwell.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
scribbler
13 years 10 months ago
Hi loved
I never intended my poem to be taken as more than a write of fiction. i guess I'll be careful to state that a poem is fiction if I ever write such again 'cause I Don't want to cause friends anxiety........................stan
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loved
13 years 9 months ago
am i lost to the world of neopoet i haven't been read don't
WORRY
I am still alive not dead
HOPEFULLY
loved
13 years 9 months ago
stan the fiction man
LOVE is just a four letter word
we all say it
but few mean it
thanks friend
long time no see.
glad u do remember me
and write more fiction not friction will ye?.
magics02
13 years 9 months ago
loved
I am lost
what it it that was
written that
made so much
of another darn
friction..alas
laughing out loud
Mona
loved
13 years 9 months ago
hahahaha
u smile and that makes my day
thanks friend....MONA