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the name of a fairy

        fairy come out now
  come stand out of darkness
      we shall rule the fey

     pixie your name now
   lilly amber rose my lord
    im at your command

          the wrath of my hand
    shall force you to be mine now
            lilly amber rose

         lilly was scared now
     she had to follow her king
       her name controlled

       the name of a fey
   was to take away free will
     given to the holder
— Tessadiana, Jan 31, 2009

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