couplet

wounds heal, leaving scars
like morbid stones on greens

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

Comments

raj

13 years 10 months ago

thank you Lonnie for the read

thank you Lonnie for the read and appreciative comment..it is my maiden attempt to express a thought as concisely as possible allowing the reader to expand on those lines as perceived by them and deemed fit....hence i coined this style as a twinket though there may not be such poetry form...lol..

Candlewitch

13 years 10 months ago

Dear raj,

eloquently expressive! I appreciate!

always, Cat

raj

13 years 10 months ago

Dear Cat

thank you for the read and appreciative comment..means a lot while i try to come back from a block...

raj

13 years 10 months ago

Thank you Rosi for the read

Thank you Rosi for the read and appreciative comment...

scribbler

13 years 10 months ago

hi raj

leave it to you to think Haiku are too wordy lmao. This reads like the final two lines of a fine poem.........stan

raj

13 years 10 months ago

Stan

this is my maiden attempt to explore the possibility of expressing more in fewer lines...i am going to try out some more ...

raj

13 years 9 months ago

Dearest JayCee

thank you for the read and your appreciative comment...i am attempting to write more of these short ones...most have commented that they would like this to be expanded but i think it would be nice to provide this as a stimulant and let the readers expand on the theme the way they perceive it...

much love...