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Wishing

If I could have a single wish
And have that wish come true
I’d wish that we could always be
Together, me and you

I’d wish eternal happiness
A lifetime filled with bliss
To hold you in my arms each night
And feel your tender kiss

Just having you beside me
Is all I that I desire
You are the one I dream of
You set my heart on fire

I’d wish for you because, you know,
I simply can’t resist ya
But, if you don’t stop your moanin’
I’ll be wishing for your sister

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Region, Country: Norfolk, UK, GBR

Favorite Poets: Kipling, T.S Eliot, Hilaire Belloc, Ogden Nash, Spike Milligan and many more.

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shazbat

shazbat

14 years 1 month ago

ooh er

Cheers Eph, think it's been over a year, hasn't it? haven't had much time to do anything for quite a while, hopefully thats changed and I can piss a few people off with my nonsense.

All the best, John

shazbat

shazbat

14 years 1 month ago

Hi Rosi, it's nice to hear

Hi Rosi, it's nice to hear from you again, Hilaire Belloc used to say " if you can't find a rhyme, make it up, and if that doesn't work then near enough is good enough, a man after my own heart.

John

shazbat

shazbat

14 years 1 month ago

Hello treacle chops

Hi Anna,

it's been a long time, but I've been exceptionally busy for the past eighteen months, think I'm just about back on track now, got a book published earlier this year though (it's on Amazon and it's called "Hidden shallows) I'll see if I can dig some stuff out to post on here now and then.

John

R

raj

14 years 1 month ago

It is good that you are back.

It is good that you are back...else we would have missed this lovely write....although the last line affects the flow..i perceived it as "even in love there is a blemish"...don't know if i got it right...

weirdelf

weirdelf

14 years 1 month ago

Great to see you man.

I enjoyed this, nearly didn't read it but for your name I scanned it and the last stanza drew me back in.

introvert

introvert

14 years ago

Hi,

I like,I like...especially the last two lines of the last stanza(it left my mouth open for a while there)lol.