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Sep 25, 2011
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T I N C T U R E
her bodies worn like a watch
her fingers trace
patterns
pretty as she is
its how she likes to spend
her time
she can vanish in a crowd
but timeless
beauty
wears forever
its her spotlight
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ladderwords
13 years 9 months ago
Very succinct. Would love to
Very succinct. Would love to see this idea fleshed out.
Barbara Writes
13 years 9 months ago
Really good
Short and well written piece
Esker
13 years 9 months ago
Storyboard
sometime the beauty in the works was the simple linework
like a breeze
the flash in few lines
forming the concept in the mind
Just..the glimmer
the fragrant memory of something
yearned for or examined
just out of the periphery....
Esker
13 years 8 months ago
this is for "A"
who is wise with years
beyond her age
and beautiful
with grace
..