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E V E N T S O F D U R A T I O N

dream trickles down
like the damp wood
of the raceway

above the dark embrace
of the day we can hear
the birds

the soft mute rot of leaves
the silver backbone of
the glacial scar stone

and light falls down on
her face and eyes
the shadows easing
like camaflouge

beautiful and intense

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Esker

Esker

13 years 9 months ago

quiet and careful

need the brash be so brusque
where is art in stealth steady step
slipping into dimensions
like a dream show
no frequent turbulence
for those whom are swift
and disciplined...

lou

lou

13 years 9 months ago

Wow

All i can say is i love this.

Lou

Esker

Esker

13 years 9 months ago

I travelled by train

hitchiked much so I had time to stare out windows
during passages of quiet
the reflection Storytelling for the sake of the ride
for drawing a bond of experience sometimes had
breaks the images flickering past
in the speed of conduct of destination
were hard to capture in memory the details
are there but in conveyance
its a gesture sketch I try to assume
when Im writing

its not about all the blades of grass described
sometimes but of the feeling of all that