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this man's no good mangoes homeblood on his handsand he washes it offjust laughs it offonly the blood don't come offso he rubs it inand he's rubbing his eyesmisery's eyes hate and lieslove deprivedblood inscribedand tears long driedresurfaceremorse flowsfrom hells holesthis man knowsof blood tollssilence!this man's no good manbut he may have beenthis man is brokenfell from withinhis sins unspokendeaf ears don't listenso he turns to god in prayerbows his headhands in the air"save me!"....but god turned awayand the blood stained
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