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Sep 29, 2011
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what I heard when you eavesdropped
I'm trying to have an intimate discussion
but the bastard keeps repeating himself
and I just know I'm going to be late.
"Haven't you learned anything?" the wind
seems to say, patting me on the shoulder
so that I turn around and wonder who.
Now, i don't know which way to go for the
rest of this poem, and I'll be damned if a horned
owl can penetrate my deepest concern.
The universe arrives in perfect time ever on the right track.
Stepping in, I step out. No one knows who is who in the dark
without first having been touched, then recognized.
A swallow swoops into the picture, performs an aerial ballet,
plucks bits and pieces of our conversation and then
wings away.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
13 years 9 months ago
Dear Anna,
Versitile is right! Is there any subject you don't handle?
always, Cat
Kailashana2
13 years 9 months ago
Haha. Thanks for your
Haha. Thanks for your reading, Lonnie, Gee & Cat.
I just changed a word that didn't *belong*.
Subject? I object!
~A