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Esker

Oct 03, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

PLEASURE PEDIGREE

coiled is the sight
alive with a growl
the water dances
where the draw
is shallow
and the curvature
of depth is might

Might promise
texture treatments
doorway meaning
tilt hip leaning

Leave colours
like mists
upon the naked
exposed skin
like ruby kisses
on collars
while the shower
hisses

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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13 years 9 months ago

inhale

perfume lux hesitations
warm expanse
caress dilation

how the fall
with its warm
cherish
brings out the best

13 years 9 months ago

Wow! I must have been missing something.

I had better go back and read more carefully some of your recent posts.

You seem to be using a hint of structure, rhyme and partial rhyme forms to enhance what was your totally original and profoundly imagistic naive style.

Love this piece!