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All In Humility

Only great people
are humble like you
and I,

That's why along the sea beaches
we roll
and
the surfs pass by ...

But then some one looks back
and says
Wasn't he
He?
Yeah that's
All about life aint it.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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loved

loved

13 years 9 months ago

That you could find time to grin

sets my heart in a spin ,
some day we shall have more fun ,
when
A Nobel we win

we will become good friends
once we know each other as poets only
see u around

Today after years
a Swedish Nordic poet
was awarded
the NOBEL

Someday when in the bushels of time ,
we surface more simpler than naive
perhaps our faces shall reveal ,
the purpose of mankind
....hopefully......................

loved

loved

13 years 9 months ago

At times I wonder whether I am being really missed as much as I

MISS U ALL Neopoets of the world...

sets my heart in a spin ,
some day we shall have more fun ,
when
A Nobel we win

we will become good friends
once we know each other as poets only
see u around

Today after years
a Swedish Nordic poet
was awarded
the NOBEL

Someday when in the bushels of time ,
we surface more simpler than naive
perhaps our faces shall reveal ,
the purpose of mankind
....hopefully......................