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lou
lou
Oct 12, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the workshop:

A Little Humor In Writing

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Humor in writing workshop 4 - Fanny

There was a girl called Fanny
She looked the Hulk it’s uncanny
Bellowed and blew
Made a hullabaloo
Then turned back into Fanny

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

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Geezer

Geezer

13 years 9 months ago

Just one little crit...

The last line doesn't have enough syllables. As to the humor, I see that right away, and you also wrote a limerick! love ya, ~ Gee