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Oct 12, 2011
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Humor in writing workshop 4 - Fanny
There was a girl called Fanny
She looked the Hulk it’s uncanny
Bellowed and blew
Made a hullabaloo
Then turned back into Fanny
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
13 years 12 months ago
Dear Lou,
Cute! Good Luck with this workshop.
always, Cat
Geezer
13 years 12 months ago
Just one little crit...
The last line doesn't have enough syllables. As to the humor, I see that right away, and you also wrote a limerick! love ya, ~ Gee