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Oct 14, 2011
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For You All Who Know Me
Yeah,
I roam the world
and my cat’s whiskers;
give me the wisdom,
to follow you or any one...
Now I have seen Bombay 17 times
in my life...
ask me where you stay
and,
I will tell,
within
one hundred miles
I maybe wrong
hahahaa.....
I like and
I love
those who love me,
as friends
as I am only love hungry
I eat little
far less than what's needed for my age...
you all are lovely friends of Neopoet
So I love you all
from this far distance
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
13 years 9 months ago
Why are you shouting and repeating yourself?
You've posted this at least 3 times, including in a workshop, shouting in caps.
U is spelt you, except by illiterate adolescents in text messages.
Welcome back.
loved
13 years 9 months ago
My regrets .....not shouting
Repetition overruled
not keeping too well
hence be excused sir.
Thanks for the welcome back
Shall amend when better
Have a good day
weirdelf
13 years 9 months ago
Best wishes and hope you feel better soon,
I always make my worst faux pas here when I'm not well
loved
13 years 9 months ago
Thy wish is
my command
I have reposted it u
you may now wash off your disgust
Thanks I'.m better now
regards
loved
13 years 8 months ago
Thy wish is deleted
deleted