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Oct 16, 2011
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Soldier of freedom
Unsolicited garbage spilled
Upon the battle field
Weapons formulated to destroy
Obliterate all meaning
Swagger and bluff
you entered the arena
ready for war
Arrogance unyielding
Opposition shielded
In the trenches shooting back
Snipers ready to attack
Soldiers of freedom
Battle commences individualism
Is our weapon
Nonconformity our armour
Liberty our choice
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Excuse lack of punctuation and poor lay out for now please , I will come back to that Lol!! Thank you
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Roscoe Lane
13 years 9 months ago
No need for,
No need for excuses it's great, and the last verse nails it. Terrific write . Regards Roscoe...
lou
13 years 9 months ago
Roscoe
Thank you very much
Lou
Hooded Stranger
13 years 9 months ago
Lou
Lou,
dreadful use of punctuation and layout is pants!
LOL!
HS
lou
13 years 9 months ago
Dan
Cheeky Bugger !!!
LMAO!!
Lou
magics02
13 years 9 months ago
Lou
Spot On
Warrior Lou!!
Great writing here I like it
Mona
xox