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Oct 18, 2011
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BLACK WIDOW
BLACK WIDOW
[ Jacksonville, Florida 1952]
I remember you in waves of black silk
floating lazily in a summer breeze
grace in slow motion
swaying ecstasy
across the grass
shalimar lingering in the air
as you passed
wide brimmed widow’s hat
pulled down to your eyes
raven night
hidden dark
diamonds sparkling rainbows
in sunlight
ruby lips smiling at whisperis and lies:
the widow's kiss
icy cold.
the passion of many men
a friend to a lonely boy
of ten
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Esker
13 years 8 months ago
Portent and potent
just love this work Germania
just love it
smooth
startling
vivid
Geremia
13 years 8 months ago
True story. too long to type.
True story. too long to type. Thanks,Steven.
joe
Ladderwords
13 years 8 months ago
Slips through the mouth and
Slips through the mouth and into the air. Wonderful. Thank you.
Geremia
13 years 8 months ago
Wonderfully poetic comment,
Wonderfully poetic comment, Thank you :)
joe
lou
13 years 8 months ago
Joe
A very beautiful and evocative poem.
Lou
Geremia
13 years 8 months ago
That makes me happy. Thank
That makes me happy. Thank you, Lou.
joe