You Honour me more than I Deserve

Thanks,
Follow my style,
If it can please you
And
Shake up this world,
Of lonely followers...

Time moves on,
So should we too,
And
Take to the Eagles wings

Albeit,
We don't know
What all Eagles can achieve.
I do hope,
Others will follow soon.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

weirdelf

13 years 8 months ago

I've edited this comment,

Anna's comment has reminded me of my own better self and conscience.

I wish you all the best in your poetic endeavors while also urging you to strive for quality and improvement instead of quantity.

I know you have written some excellent poems and recognition is a wonderful thing.

Kailashana2

13 years 9 months ago

Poets are self-indulgent narcissists Jess, get over it. However, we all can improve our art, the more we walk about. Remember how that was, Jess? I do. And I think that's what
Loved is saying here...but I may be wrong, though it's all about being loved, I think.

The dream of it being far more delusional than its reality, which sort of breaks eagles' wings.

lol. and ;-(

loved

13 years 8 months ago

thanks to you both

Today there are more poets,
than poetry readers
Yes narcissism is a disease ,
we must safeguard against
have a good day alll