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Nov 29, 2010
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INSATIABLE
I sit
with an emptiness
that fills me up -
a longing so deep
the well
has dried up.
I cry
with a sadness
that says: 'Don't go"
a melancholy
so dark
it destroys the soul.
I come
from a place
called "never enough"
There's hunger at the table
There's thirst in the cup
a need so great
no feast can fill up.
BjR 29 November, '10
Inspired by a quotation from RUMI "Is not the thirst when the well is full, THirst that is unquenchable?"
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Bonitaj
14 years 7 months ago
Ian!
What a lovely message! Thanks for sharing your kindness today!
Bonitaj
weirdelf
10 years 6 months ago
nice structure
nice structure
where are you?