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weirdelf
weirdelf
Nov 03, 2011 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Kind of Lingers

The feeling

kind of lingers
kinda lingers
kindalingus

oh yes that feeling

cindalingas
cinallingas
cunnilingus

oh yes!

About This Poem

Last Few Words: shazbat made me do it.

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Sydney, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: The Romantics, The Mersey Sound, The Beats and, of course, The Bard

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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

13 years 8 months ago

Dear Jess,

Love the way you play with the words. Very slick and (cunning) Brought a smile to me and a chuckle.

always, Cat

loved

loved

13 years 8 months ago

I am your fan

so I guessed the last word
what it would be
And
was the cunning- in -the -less
thatI see your name in my fans list
astonishes me
hope you really mean it
thanks to you
for your oceanic heart
in the deserts of life
i shall remember thee

loved

loved

13 years 8 months ago

Only a gemsmith....

can evaluate
a gem
thank you
for your speediest response
and
teaching me
what I ought to have known
first is no caps
i salute you though
with a cap on...