I Like those Who Side Me

Seems you had something to say, but I must be honest, I feel this poem need some work. Major.

First, the punctuation. Please read this poem as you will want it to be read. Where you pause, put a coma. When you try to "explain" another thought, use a semi-colon. If you mean to start another thread of thought, use a full stop.

Without punctuation, a poem is hard to read. It is like water in a shapeless container. We see it, read it, know what it is, but cannot guess what it should be like.

Do not assume that at the end of every line comes a natural pause. Be explicit in your punctuation. use parentheses if you have to. Shelley did, and it was marvelous.

Then, it'll be best to leave a little note so we know how to approach the poem. The title is often not enough