Another Self-Oriented One

I Dare to Tread
Where even angels
If any ,do dread,

Many works of creativity,
I have read
And
Many poets to victory lead,

I always endeavour
To help all those,
Who for me do care
As you do
And
Now my free verses share

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

loved

13 years 8 months ago

Self oriented poet ,some say I am, Am I really?

Some one place me in my rightful place
with Grace ,{capital G}
if you feel nuances of poetry,
I can't trace.

Kailashana2

13 years 8 months ago

Barry and I were just talking

Barry and I were just talking about this last night. Poetry is a language onto itself, I think it comes
easily when the all the Kundalini centers are open. We ascend into the spoken word and Grace descends into the speaker. Since there is no duality, as such, there's only *This*.

Let he who has ears, hear.

;-)

Love, Loved

p.s. It's Grace that teaches us we are *Loved*. Eh?

loved

13 years 8 months ago

Are you into YOGA

Or KAMASUTRA

Kundalini awakening is symbolic and sexually oriented
in a mind which sees nothing beyond.....
you know what
I take your comment as positive hopefully

Rhiannon1010

13 years 8 months ago

What I Think........ What does it matter, eh? ;)

I think the best poetry comes from when we write about what we know best,,, and what do we know better than our selves? :) I think there is a lot of raw truth in this poem. Good write! :)

loved

13 years 8 months ago

So grateful to you, for the boost that you give

So grateful to you,
For the boost that you give
Poetry surfaces from within,
And in the minds of archaic concepts,
Times lapse,
Who still race after

metre and rhyme…

When the order of life changes,
Each day each hour,
If poetry is prosaic,
Never mind,
Better than being archaic.

Thanks for the delightful write.