Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Nov 30, 2011
⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
AVIARY GUEST
night
slender as wings
let them
sleek rest
against the
soul
and winter settles
like a dream
falling slow in motion
I can stay aside with
you forever
watching this city
becoming light
the whisper
of histories
rising
with shadows
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Esker
13 years 11 months ago
For all the Angels
whom have kept
routes
and hearts
from the precipice
Geremia
13 years 11 months ago
The imagery borders on the
The imagery borders on the sureal and produces surprising and wonderful flashes of "another truth"
joe
Esker
13 years 11 months ago
Thank You Joe
there are other "Truths" I have felt them brush against me!
Geremia
13 years 11 months ago
In October I almost died.
In October I almost died. Yes, I have seen "other truths."
joe
wesley snow
13 years 11 months ago
Okay, you're growing on me.
It's still free verse. It still doesn't rhyme. But it's growing on me. This is rather lovely. wesley
Nordic cloud
13 years 11 months ago
you magical magician of words Steven.
Your use of words
seduces our feelings and sensibilities
into knowing the exact atmosphere you wish to conjure up
within the poem;
things historic becoming darker
than the present whiteness,
rising,
you magical magician of words Steven.
Love from Anninatrance.