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Dec 07, 2011
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INDIGNANT JUDGMENT
The glamour for change
The face of uncertainty
The search for a messiah
Warranted by our sorry state
Tilted will of people in battle
With self-proclaimed patriots
Craving for glory and power
Phantom bubbles of leadership
First African American
Our erstwhile Goodluck
The people began to wonder
Insecurity and job lost
Loosing homes
Leading to occupy cities
Questions are many
Answers are few
Millions of living dead
Lined up unwillingly
To take turn in the graves
Change in constant mode
Stubborn stiffed necks demand
The head of an unwilling leader
And call for a replacement
About This Poem
Review Request Direction:
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What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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t. reflexion
13 years 7 months ago
Thank you…
I am glad you like it. part of our human nature is never satisfied with what it has and so look up for something new. Best wishes.
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