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Dec 03, 2010
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coded message
under the layers
of simple text
are these
coded meanings
and they are
difficult to
decypher without
knowing the writer
or something about
their motives
It's not at all
easy to find a
place to start
or a point of reference
It's all in there
you just have to search
reading is the only option
begin at the
first sentence
it helps if it's
interesting
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I may edit or rewrite this ...............
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
14 years 6 months ago
A very interesting theme...
I like the thought behind it, and it was interesting enough for me to read all the way through. What was your motivation? LOL ~ Geezer
brittle light
14 years 6 months ago
paring down, sculpting the
paring down, sculpting the thought, to bare essence, sleek and lean. The neatest trick of the trade! you are good at this. I like this one very much. keep on doing.........
Edevold
14 years 6 months ago
Geezer, Brittle - thanks for commenting
what was my motivation?? i don't know.... the bible codes, the wikileaks, ????? , Reading other poems on neopoet and trying to figure out what they're trying to get at????????
I guess I like things simple......pared down,,, lean,,, maybe that will be a future title , "Simplify"
thanks for the comments..... Mark
scribbler
14 years 6 months ago
coded
Famed architect Frank Lloyd Wright insisted less is more. You would have been a good student of his.............scribbler