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Jan 15, 2012
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Possibilia
Tonight the northern star and I will speak
Together will see the power of fantasy
No alarm to wake me or lingering responsibilities
No fee to pay only the spark of friendship
No slithering monotony to have its way with me
I know it seems optimistic, in a cosmos so twisted
The sounds of grand pianos play until daybreak
Festive wine poured into every glass this night
That dream is not just vivid, it’s ready to be lived
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Nordic cloud
13 years 6 months ago
I like the title
Together we'll see?
no responsibilities no alarm awake me
no alarm awake me no responsibility
the spark of friendship, no fee to pay
not so fond of the word slithering for monotony
this optimistic thought in twisted ...no
Grand pianos sound till daybreak
sparkling wine fills each glass this night
my dream......!
Well I hope I don't offend but for me I was troubled here and there Paul.
Just ignore me, but I did think around it. Ann.
Apostolos "Pau…
13 years 6 months ago
Ann
Thank you for stopping by will take it under advisement