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Jan 16, 2012
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Bitten
Narcotic grin, agitated
Demon jaws swallow her whole
She is afflicted
Savage, insane, horrified and stricken
Terrified She will rip out throats
As a result of being bitten
Holds herself in prone position
Lamenting what has come to pass
Longing to be forgiven
Were wolf lover addicted
To her sensuality
Stalking her in the undergrowth , undetected
Fatal collision only one will survive
Tooth and claw
Who will be victorious and end the fight alive?
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Comments
Candlewitch
13 years 5 months ago
Dear Lou,
Very apt title! this piece flows very well and I like the direction in which it takes me. Suductively dark! I like these lines:
Were wolf lover addicted
To her sensuality
Stalking her in the undergrowth , undetected
the ending is a sad asumption that one of them must die. Why can't they meet (be over taken) and mate? Just my suggestion. I like the idea of werewolf lovers, LOL!
always, Cat