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S
scribbler
Jan 28, 2012 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

TWO TOILETS

Two toilets guard a driveway's start
and both of them filled up with dirt
so odd they gave me a mild start
And then I grinned so wide it hurt
on seeing flowers start to sprout

Then I nearly wet my pants
When Susan took time to explain
what I beheld were"potted" plants
I laughed so hard it hurt my brain!
and now I guess that I'll sign out

serious poem from serious poet lmao........stan

About This Poem

Last Few Words: another not ready for prime time poem lol

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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S

scribbler

13 years 5 months ago

Hi Wes

You really had to dig deep to find this one lol. I was on verge of unpublishing it due to lack of interest.......stan

infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

13 years 5 months ago

Stan

Well I thought it was 1.) Hilarious and 2.) a good idea. Expensive idea, but good nonetheless.

S

scribbler

13 years 5 months ago

Hi Jess

I reckon they thought growing marijuana in them would be redundant lol...........stan

infinite_dwarf

infinite_dwarf

13 years 5 months ago

Stan

A "pot" trifecta?? Potted pot in pots (toilet sometimes called a/the pot). Whoo!

S

scribbler

13 years 5 months ago

well......

Could be a pot quadfecta. For the house driveway led to had gone to pot lol.........stan

S

scribbler

13 years 5 months ago

yes

Let's gather ingredients for POTporrie................