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The terminal thinker


Waves of obsession
fill the crevices of the mind
engulfing what once was
the tidal has begun

Barraged with thoughts
that makes sense yet don't
imagined solutions,real problems
will she stay afloat

So thankful at night
when her head hits the pillow
another day subbed
the endless flood.

                        Ash Knight
— Dark.Poetress, Apr 13, 2010

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