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Feb 08, 2012
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Why!
Why is it that all artists and poets,
are at their best
after sex
It’s a natural thing all enjoy
but still younger ones fake
while the elders do make
and
the artist puts his experiences at stake
then upon a canvas reveals
the artful deals,
as poets lament
but readers fail to comment
Oh! why can someone tell me?
the effect of abject nudity,
that energizes the human mind
more than subtlety
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
13 years 5 months ago
Some of my best poetry is
after long times without sex
Although I don't recommend it!
loved
13 years 4 months ago
I shall return
to thank each one of you for your diligence
and
shall attend to each one
time permitting as I fly in heaven..
for the present..
Ian.T
13 years 4 months ago
Loved
Sparrow wants to know if you are leaving to go on an orgie, so that on your return the poetry will be better???? lol
He's left the building heading down town to sow some Oats or other cereal that's what he says, Yours Ian.T