T E R M I N I

absolute
sky
ribbons of blue
how I know
you

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Comments

Esker

13 years 5 months ago

I used to know all of the terms and applications

but gave that away
bits and peices of memory return
I write such long poems at times
thought that a short little poem would
be applicable to break that length
up

lori

13 years 5 months ago

one of those ones

catch my eye
the head turn and gone
just the glimpse to carry on
and the backdrop
wide angle and resting
on the horizon

I see the limbs the branches
the edge of her
and shes gone..................

Esker

13 years 5 months ago

Pretty much somes it up

a vision of a vision
serene and edged
not yesterday
and not tommorow
Lori

like a cedar eyed
thought at the rough
edge of dusk

Nordic cloud

13 years 5 months ago

absolute sky

absolute sky
ribbons of blue
how I know you

That would be less pretentiously arranged and succinct. Even able to be picked up like a little precious stone in the hand, the sky in your hand.
Just me mumbling.

red ribbons
the flame of sunset
I feel your touch

Ann.