Genie in a Bottle 1

Has Jeannie anything particular to say,
otherwise it is a Geni,
not to detract from your decision to call it Jeannie.

"Nigh above my heart.........................Odd use of the word nigh, high perhaps?
Place you on my knobby knees"..........My father won second prize in a Knobbly knees contest at the local games in our village in 1947.:)

Maybe "and play games on the interface could be the last line, neatly.

I think this was good Barbara.

LuvAnn

didnt know how the other half felt
about my taking leave when the system
of business just didnt work between
us anymore...I mourned that I had
no understanding....nothing that I wanted
when I thought, felt I was giving all the
time...missed the rare magic times
when we had laughter..intimacy...compassion
and that satisfaction of comfort around
each other till the tension tore it all away
and we went seperate ways..

Now I know..I see it here with an Ex I'm still
keeping.. We both are not on the same
line but we dead end sometimes at the
same terminal. Meeting much for chats
talks to sit on the bench and admire
sunsets. I see know the value of not being
like two peas in a pod. But I do see the
grieving too Laptop magic
Genie time how true this machine comforts
us lets us reach those still that we once
loved and were loved by
(whatever love is ..for all its different and intimate
in many ways of individuality)

great emotive poem!!

Thank You!