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Feb 20, 2012
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Sexily Rabbitic
Rabbits only sexualize,
they homoise
and
are downright stupid,
in intelligence naught
and
forever in sexual acts get caught.
The sex in rabbits
surpasses all
and
intelligence,
you as a woman
too have after all.
Look around the world,
UK and India and indirectly America
are ruled by women
Sexual rape and body massage
are simple acts on their part
as men are born
with an external sword,
women hold the umbilical cord
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
13 years 5 months ago
Dear Loved,
an interesting poem, to say the least. What is (homoise)? I couldn't find it in my dictionary. Rabits are very low in intelligence and are very into their basic needs, to be sure, lol. I wouldn't say that the world is run by women, as I feel the strong opression of the dominant male influence, here in America. And it is pervassive in the Aribic lands. Rape is not a simple act but an act of rage. Influenced by how the perp was conditioned in my humble opinion. But you made me think, so thank you! Keep writing!
always, Cat
loved
13 years 5 months ago
Thank you Cat
for your conveyance.
As a mini bard I take the liberty to coin
and
the word conveys a sense of homosexuality,
In rabbits,
as it does in males.
The rest is a matter of perception.
American women indirectly rule/ruled America .
In the times of the Reagan era,
not a leaf stirred
unless ma'am was Okayed
by her astrologers.
Later Lewinsky, I think played a major role .
Now we have Hillary .
Three examples for USA
I think should suffice.
Thanks anyway
you comfort the poet in me.
weirdelf
13 years 5 months ago
Loved, you are getting better and better
my early crits of your poems were insulting because they made no sense, they seemed to me silly verbal plays that had no meaning (to me anyway, perhaps I missed your meaning)
You are now writing real meaning and I think you will improve.
Your percentage of poems for a book will improve I am sure.
homoise [hormonise]?
Your ambivalent sexuality is difficult to many people, yet I applaude your courage for expressing it,
with love and respect,
loved
13 years 4 months ago
As you applaud I salute
As you applaud
I salute you,
for the boldness instilled in me
by you
and
only by you